Date: 10/01/06 7:47 pm Title: Part 1
What a glorious surprise. I reread the story to date yesterday and tried to send you another review asking you to please remember your unfinished orphans and don't you know, just as I hit submit, I lost my power.
To see this update today is like a gift from on high. And the subject matter of the chapter is beyond a surprise all the way up to shock. I thought for a brief second, I was reading another story and then you tied it so well to the succeeding chapters.
I really prefer the CSI fan fiction mainly because I don't watch any of the others but you write so well, I think I will start reading some of your other postings. Thank you again.
Date: 06/08/06 8:52 pm Title: Part 1
I have been looking for this story for more than a month. I came across it by accident while looking for something else and then lost it. I notice you have not updated since March. Please do finish this; the basic idea while dark and painful to think about is very unique and most interesting. I have enjoyed the way you have taken the story from present time as Greg is becoming a true CSI 1 and yet managed to bring in the pilot and the loss of Holly Gibbs. You have managed to maintain a continuity that is much better and certainly more professional that the writers of the actual series. I'm looking forward to some sort of conclusion. Please don't leave me hanging.